December 07, 2004
Elevator tanka
Elevator sign:
"Out of order - Men at work".
I press the button.
The screams, they are horrific.
I guess I'll walk down the stairs.
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"Out of order - Men at work".
I press the button.
The screams, they are horrific.
I guess I'll walk down the stairs.
A "tanka", for those of you unfamiliar with the beast, is a poetic form similar to but older than the haiku. It has five lines of 5,7,5,7 and 7 syllables. Feel free to try some for yourself.
Nope, not back yet. Another Trickle post for your entertainment. See how much I love y'all? It's not everybody who'd go to these lengths to keep y'all amused, you know.
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Jim,
I'm not sure if poetry is safe around you....
(nor apparently are elevator repair men. YOUCH!!!!)
(congrats btw on getting on the short list!)
Posted by: Rachel Ann at December 07, 2004 04:30 PM (I9nMw)
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Blog that makes me smile:
Snooze Button Dreams are too cute.
I live to read posts.
Jim fills my sad life with joy.
I need to find a new life!
I am so thankful you went to all that trouble to keep us amused....we are all eternally grateful.
Posted by: Mitzi at December 07, 2004 09:24 PM (SQGRt)
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